Site: Murder Reviewer: Angelica Total Score: 71/100 splash page: 3/5 points Your splash page obviously served the purpose of a splash page. It wasnt too cluttered or unorganized. I did have to look for where to enter though. layout: 5/15 First of all, your splash page is completely different from your layout. Also, your layout does not fit the page unless its at full size, so its not resizable. Your graphic quality, isnt too great and is a bit mixed. Images mixed within your layout are well done and some are not. It is, however, basically organized. color scheme 5/5 Your color scheme is good and consistent. None of them clash or force me to strain my eyes. navigation:8/10 your navigation is pretty much simple to understand, easy to find. Although being draggable content, your navigation moved a few times randomly. content: 10/25 First of all, I would like to say that you do have a lot of content, and you also have content I've never seen on a site before. All of your content was very unique and in its own way organized. Some of it I found confusing and some of it I really liked. But my overall opinion of it was that it was really random. Below on Reviewers Comments, I'll breakdown what I thought of each page so you can understand how I viewed this little better. originality: 20/20 Your site was above all very original. There was really nothing on your site I've seen on anyone else's. Your site is very unique and stands out with the rest. errors: 5/5 I didnt find any errors or broken links. dedication: 10/10 going through your updates you seem very dedicated to your site and update it frequently. Robotic Hearts link 5/5 Found it!!!!!! reviewers comments: 0/0 Like I said above, I'm going to breakdown your content so I explain to you how I viewed it a little better. The Section, The Lady, first of all, was one really large pop-up. All of your information is contained in a very narrow space on that large pop-up, and at first it was confusing because I wasn't sure exactly what it was. But as I read through it, the way you have it setup is really cool. And I love the song list that you can choose from. That's great. My only comment about this page is that its too big and there's too much empty space. But I liked your backround on this page also. Your lyrics page too me seemed basically random, so I wasn't really sure what I was looking at, but personally I did like the pictures. But the Dancer page didn't have a backround or at least it didn't load. Your Desire page was interesting. The backround was again different from your main layout, and so is every page that you go to from there. And all of them took a long time to load, And I wasn't too sure what I was reading if they where poems or what. But I did like them. Your mixed tapes page was interesting, with a lot of awesome music. I thought that page was really cool idea, and it was also very colorful. Words was another popup, but much smaller then the first one. Overall I liked the way you designed this page, and I liked the content on it. The backround was very interesting also. Pretend was a very random thing, I had no idea what it was I reading, but I liked it. There was also no backround on this page, only a graphic. Danse macabre was a good information page, but again no backround. Content was another pop-up. A colorful backround and some pretty cool content for visitors. Your guestbook link did not work and Old work I liked looking through, you have some interesting stuff there. But basically your content, though it was all very original, because you would never find these things on any other site, it was very random.